I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
a sote on the. They had honey moon in the betfall fortes they had fnu dacing and danging water . and they had fun. They had fun.they went to go home and they had fun in the forstr
I get it, they had fun.. Is there a different way you could have said that instead of saying 'they had fun' four times in the same story?
ReplyDeleteYou have tried to use some powerful words which is great - "they had a honeymoon in the beautiful forrest"